My classmates short essay

A classmate who has good relation with us can become our close friend in our life time. A friend who becomes our friend when we’re just a student is the most pure one; we should think her as treasure. Word Count: 319 ... Two years ago, I was very lonely and did not talk with anyone about my feeling.

And her eyes has already red because of crying and she unable to speak words for many times in the talk process. It can be seen the cat how important for her. I believe the importance of cat for her more than these, it will be a feeling that we never feel. My Classmate – Short Personal Story. (2016, Nov 11).

These responses help give me a better idea in how I can improve my papers. For example, things they write down in how I need to transition my next paragraph or sometimes, a paragraph might need to be more in depth. In addition it gives me and idea of how people view my writing and what I need to change.

Learning from Classmates From this class I had the opportunity to meet my classmates as well as them helping me write better papers. Every time we get the chance to peer edit, I sometimes get different types of response on my papers from my classmates.